October 3rd, 2007
Lungs and knocked. Don’t ask me why, but with every book I seem to pick a new favorite word to use and abuse. (I think all writers do this.) With Unbound it was core. Seriously, what was I thinking? And I didn’t even notice its abuse until the copy edit stage–luckily there was still time to delete/change that rascally rabbit.
So, today I am doing my final pass (before handing it over to a friend) of Wild Hunt (Venge’s story) and I discovered two new rabbits–lungs and knocked.
Now I have to pull a deep breath into my lungs and knock a few of these babies out. 
Lori
